Similar to my digipak feedback, my magazine feedback is very positive
with only a few improvements. Due to this I was able to keep the overall
appearance of my advert the same, but just changing a few aspects.
The first aspect which I needed to change to improve the readability of the information was to make sure the song names listed are not split up e.g. Bitter -next line- Sweet. This makes it more professional appearing and more effective as an advert due to it having well set out information.
The next aspect that I added was a record label logo because my feedback suggested that I should have the logo present, due to it making it more realistic and professional.
My audience made some positive comments after seeing my magazine advert such as:
The first aspect which I needed to change to improve the readability of the information was to make sure the song names listed are not split up e.g. Bitter -next line- Sweet. This makes it more professional appearing and more effective as an advert due to it having well set out information.
The next aspect that I added was a record label logo because my feedback suggested that I should have the logo present, due to it making it more realistic and professional.
My audience made some positive comments after seeing my magazine advert such as:
· They liked
the colour scheme because it fits with the digipak making it work well as a magazine advert.
· Also they
liked the photography because it represents my artist’s image and style well and fits with the digipak.
· Another
comment which was mentioned is that they liked the visual styling of the advert because
it suits my artist and represents the indie music genre extremely well.
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